Although there were many child labor activists during the early 1900s, Lewis Hine's photographs for the NCLC were most effective in changing the public's opinion on child labor.
- it is clear what the topic is. - it is arguable- you must prove how his were more effective than other activists. - Research will be necessary -Child labor is important in history. -uses "although" Satisfies the requirements of a strong thesis
This is definitely arguable and has a single, clear focus. It requires research and pertains to something that was important then and is still important now.
It is very clear that your topic is about Lewis Hine and his photographs. The thesis is definitely arguable because some may say that his photographs were not effective. The topic is very important because it focuses on child labor, which was something in the past that is still very controversial today. Also, this will require research to back it up.
- it is clear what the topic is.
ReplyDelete- it is arguable- you must prove how his were more effective than other activists.
- Research will be necessary
-Child labor is important in history.
-uses "although"
Satisfies the requirements of a strong thesis
Arguable because of the phrase "most effective," and it also mentions the other side.
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely arguable and has a single, clear focus. It requires research and pertains to something that was important then and is still important now.
ReplyDeleteIt is very clear that your topic is about Lewis Hine and his photographs. The thesis is definitely arguable because some may say that his photographs were not effective. The topic is very important because it focuses on child labor, which was something in the past that is still very controversial today. Also, this will require research to back it up.
ReplyDeleteIt's obvious who and what the project will be focused on, there is a connection to the theme, and it is arguable.
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