Even though there were several leaders who fought for the termination of discrimination during the civil rights movement, A. Philip Randolph focused on painstaking methods to have equality among all Americans.
This is clear in what it is addressing but could be made more arguable. It is not really a question that he focused on methods to have equality. Research is necessary, there is only one main idea, and it is something about the past that has a legacy.
1.It is clear that the project will be about. 2. This is not very arguable because after the comma you are just making a statement. It isn't opinionated. 3. Research on Randolph will be needed. 4. There is only one main idea. 5. Civil Right's is as important topic.
1. It is clear what your project will be about: Randolph's methods for equality. 2. Some people can argue that Randolph's methods were not painstaking?? 3. Research about his methods can help prove this thesis. 4. The main idea is primarily discrimination during the civil rights movement. 5. Yes, discrimination in American history is very important.
This is clear in what it is addressing but could be made more arguable. It is not really a question that he focused on methods to have equality. Research is necessary, there is only one main idea, and it is something about the past that has a legacy.
ReplyDelete1.It is clear that the project will be about.
ReplyDelete2. This is not very arguable because after the comma you are just making a statement. It isn't opinionated.
3. Research on Randolph will be needed.
4. There is only one main idea.
5. Civil Right's is as important topic.
Topic is clear but there is no argument.
ReplyDeleteThis is not arguable. It is more of a fact that you're stating
ReplyDelete1. It is clear what your project will be about: Randolph's methods for equality.
ReplyDelete2. Some people can argue that Randolph's methods were not painstaking??
3. Research about his methods can help prove this thesis.
4. The main idea is primarily discrimination during the civil rights movement.
5. Yes, discrimination in American history is very important.
This project certainly has a main idea, but there is no arguable point.
ReplyDeleteIt's clear what the project will be focused on but this isn't debatable.
ReplyDeletethe topic is clear but it is not an arguable point
ReplyDeleteThe project focus is clear and requires research, but it is not debatable.
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