Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Angel and Chelsea's Thesis Draft



Thesis: In the 1900s, Alfred Stieglitz’s role in the pictorialist movement, his endorsement of various artists and photographers, and his innovative methods used in his own pieces led to
the consideration of photography as a form of art.
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 22, 2014 at 8:43 AM

    It is show several reasons that support your arguement which is good.

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  2. UnknownOctober 22, 2014 at 8:45 AM

    It is clear what the project is about, its arguable, and its worded nicely.

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  3. UnknownOctober 22, 2014 at 8:47 AM

    Try making this more arguable.
    Its more of a fact that he led to the consideration of photography as art, but what about it?

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  4. UnknownOctober 22, 2014 at 8:52 AM

    It's more factual than arguable but otherwise very good.

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  5. UnknownOctober 22, 2014 at 8:57 AM

    The project focus is clear but try to make it more debatable.

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