Wednesday, October 22, 2014
Abigail and Sabrina's Thesis Draft
In the mid-1950's, Jonas Salk was not only the most publicized scientist but was also the most influential in the development of vaccinations as demonstrated by his notable efforts and contributions to prevent the polio virus, despite the sheer doubt of his methods from other scientists.
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Not arguable and not clear what you have to prove
ReplyDeleteNot sure what you are trying to argue
ReplyDeleteThough it is important, you're mostly just stating fact and not really giving something debatable
ReplyDeletetry to make a stronger point about him to argue
ReplyDeleteThis is not arguable, it is only a fact. It isn't opinionated. Not sure what you're arguing.
ReplyDeleteIt is a run-on, so it makes it hard to follow on what you will be arguing.
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